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on THE SHOPLIFTER – a story for 11yr old learners (set in South Africa)Thanks very much, Ann. Yes, I spaced the text because I feel that it's easier for children here, whose mother tongue is not English, to understand or work out the
on THE SHOPLIFTER – a story for 11yr old learners (set in South Africa)Another interesting piece, Patricia, and the language has been kept fairly simple on the whole so should fit the type of market you mention. The story is paced well, too.I- on THE SHOPLIFTER – a story for 11yr old learners (set in South Africa)Thanks very much, Jeanne. I really appreciate your input. You're right, it is too long and needs to be tightened up. I'll work on that. Unfortunately I haven't yet seen
on THE SHOPLIFTER – a story for 11yr old learners (set in South Africa)An interesting story here, Patricia, with some good points to be learned. If it's for ESL learners I would say that it is a bit too long, and who is- on The Stranger (A child’s story for an ESL learner – i.e. English as a Second Language)Thanks very much, Jeanne. Your suggestion re 'he said/she said' makes sense. I don't know yet exactly what the publisher wants. ESL hasn't actually been specified but I mentioned it
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